by Brian Disney
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I like how the camera moved in.
cute idea, but the camera movement is really robotic.
when mery moves, the puppet should also be influenced to move. Her IK hand doesn't move until the very end.
Needs smoother movement
Very good idea. There is really no need for the camera rotation. If she is a ventriloquist, then you need to see both her and the puppet at the same time. Look at some of Jeff Dunham's live performances and see how that camera is handled.
Cool idea! It looks like a promising blocking stage. Add a little more work on the animation principles. Good luck
The camera move is unnecessary.
LOL talking to a hand puppet...lol. Her face could use a little more emotional expressiveness.
i understand that the last bit of the sound file is spoken pretty fast, but you need to tighten that animation to make it look like she's actually talking. The movements are a bit robotic, especially the head near the end, it looks like you put less work into in than you did in the beginning or you were rushed for time. Also I don't understand the purpose of the puppet in this scenario
Gaucelm De Villaret:
Puppet again? Anyway, this flows too smoothly to make it look expressive or natural enough.
Animator: Brian Disney
Description: Woman surprised at her puppets accusation
Experience: Student about six months total
Time taken: two weeks