Final Rating: 4.26. Finished 94 out of 310 entries.

605 views including the voting period.


Animator: Eric Raffle

Description: not much to tell

Experience: not enough

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Michael Whitley:

I love your idea with POV, very creative. That being said, the "daughter" (the viewer) seems as though her view is on a tripod and very mechanical. Also you should work on your rendering i noticed an issue with your lighting try and mess with your decay rate a bit so you will have smoother lighting.

Deanna Keogh:

clever idea

David Wevill:

I like the idea but I think maybe a little more emphasis on her offer would have improved this, like if she had gestured towards her fridge or handed her a bottle.

Marcella D.:

Not Bad.

Jordan Lewers:

Very interesting idea with beautiful lighting! It would have be nice to have seen some lead-up before the girl asks about the alcohol though

Connor Leuck:

The camera move at 140 happens at the same time as an action of the mother. You might delay that or not make it so extreme.


I love the first person perspective!

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Cool set-up and idea, but it is not as expressive as it might be.