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Gaucelm De Villaret:
Some good ideas... Interesting angle and placing of the characters... But the movements are exaggerated at the wrong times... Beware of the speed...
Ariyanto Zulkifli:
Nice set up. But, the timing and spacing is off. Some reference will help you get the right timing and spacing.
Keep practicing. :)
Rachel Col:
The mom's motions in the beginning are amazing! It's a bit too fast when she drinks though, and maybe do some more movements with the eyebrows/expressions? Great work though
Sabrina Winkel:
Lip sync is good the only thing I would say is the daughter. She's looking down the entire time. She has no facial expressions. Try to make her look up at her mom
Marcella D.:
Facial expressions could be worked on a bit more, I say 90%
Fernando Incetta:
Looks good, and I like the composition a lot. Work a little bit harder on the blocking stage before going into splines. Congratulations
Monica Stringer:
the drinking action and the kids reaction at that moment are, awkward, not good enough to say why, but theirs just something off there
Animator: Jordan Thompson
Description: Daughter is worried why her mother gave her an alcoholic beverage.
Experience: Currently studying at the DAVE school for animation.
Time taken: 2 Weeks