Final Rating: 2.93. Finished 244 out of 310 entries.

381 views including the voting period.


Animator: Mitchell

Description: My entry for March's animation competition

Experience: 2nd year animation student

Time taken: Over the course of the whole month


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Marcella D.:

The mother need some more smooth motion when she is changing poses.


Something you could look into improving is that a lot of the movements were very sudden or choppy.

Charlie Abb:

Good concept. A bit choppy; body and facial expression could have better transition.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Awww, there was some potential here! But the movements are too sudden, even for this genre, and is more reminiscent of a car bumping on pebbles. As said by Glen Keane (I think), avoid the "saw-tooth" regularity in animation.

Bonnie Smith:

I love how you've added a bit of humor in it. I would just like the movements to be a bit smoother.

Fernando Incetta:

Good blocking, it has a lot of potential. Good posing overall