Comments:
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Gaucelm De Villaret:
Suitable enough. It's appropriately made. Maybe a bit more exaggeration could be applied for maximum fun... Or not?
Marcella D.:
Not bad, but the mother's movement, before the daughter speaks, is a bit weird. A little tilt back, and forth is not bad, but she does it way too quickly.
Thomas Holcombe:
to much movement
Fernando Incetta:
Good work. You need to rely a little bit less in the automated curves. Also don't be afraid to exaggerate and to push your poses and facial expressions further.
Kambria J. Farmer:
In my opinion, the camera movements, as well as the over-exaggerated movements of the mother's head, make the animation too busy and take away from the really nice actions that you have achieved within your shot.
Animator: VanG
Description: Teenager at a bar with loose mum
Experience: 6 months
Time taken: 2 weeks