Final Rating: 3.73. Finished 131 out of 228 entries.

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Animator: ben

Description: Reporter guy uses fancy words in order to catch a girl's attention

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 2 weeks


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the camera movement is a bit irritating ..

Alex Mlqd:

I think you don't have to move your camera like this.
"KISS : Keep it simple and stupid"
One of the better rules of animation :)

Salvador David Tinoco Canizales:

pretty good but needs work. and the movements of the camera... please, don`t do that.


reconsider camera actions

Meridith Winterfeld:

the flipping of the camera disorients the viewer

Yara Ruiz Morelos:

camera movement is to much..

Drew Covert:

I would like to see this without all the camera moves, I think they hurt the shot. It's a bit too snappy as well but nice job

Connor Leuck:

Your camera broke the 180 degree rule.

They are also moving at the same time for most of it.

Jacob Brown-Parrish:

I think you should read up on the 180 degree rule

James Loeser:

The quick camera movement is very distracting

Kieran Gunn:

There is far too much happening in this submission.
It seems you have tried to fit in so many poses that it all gets very confusing and we can't look at both characters at the same time. When a character isn't speaking don't give them a lot of actions so that the audience can focus on the speaker.
The camera move is wholly unnecessary and breaks the 180 rule.
I think the character are also standing too close to other for a conversation between strangers.
Other than that there is some good animation in there, just need to tone it down.

Borislav Dimitrov:

what are those silly camera moves...
you can keep the camera as it is in frame 35 and thats it..