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Animator: Jose Cortez

Description: My first attempt at some serious animation

Experience: some school but very little experience

Time taken: 60+hours

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K Thomas Fosse:

I think this could be a lot better if you worke much more with the movements, etc. It's a bit too stiff and robotic and it seems more like a storyboard/animatic. And maybe some more work on the perspective.. I do like the setup as you clearly can see two people interact with eachother. Just keep on working on the details (it's all in the details). Keep it up!