Comments:
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Cameron:
Needs a lot of work fundamentally.
Derek Stewart:
Good facial expressions. Cliched idea, however. Push for something a bit more original next time.
Jan Abero:
You got the poses down, but again It's another Timing and spacing issue. Really play around with the key-frames on your timeline. It will help give you more possibilities to see the movement fully realized in your intended motion.
Caelan:
Terrible. It lacks fundamentals , and the characters seem unbelievably stiff. And even when they do limber up its still awkwardly done. near 188 it looks like the arms are having a spasm. Honestly i would go read and study the 12 principles because it just doesn't have any seem to incorparate 1 of them well. only staging really
Jaime Colque:
las voces no corresponden a niños :/
April Slocombe:
Head movements are mechanical and the man in the purple top has a funny shoulder at around frame 166. Other than these issues, the poses are subtle and the lip sync is good.
Kyle Tweed:
Make sure your poses are strong.
Animator: Steve Hunt
Description: A conversation you never want to have in the Men's Room.
Experience: Very little. Just some basic keyframing in Maya and After Effects.
Time taken: Roughly 15 hours.