Cameron:

Could use some smoothing in the character animation.

Nasser Mohammed:

is that it?

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:

Look out for twinning action for the hand and action need to have a bounce back..

Matt Murphy:

There skin is very shiny. Tone down the arm gestures a bit. You had some good actions in there, but over all I think there were just too many actions. Didn't feel natural.

Janice Liu:

needs some moving holds

April Slocombe:

Good poses and animation throughout.

Wolfgang Haas:

your characters don't actually have to act out everything they're saying