by Janice Liu
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Craig P. Smith:
Good believable movements. But I think another stronger pose would be called for on the "Why?". I doesn't have to be a big pose, but something. Very nice scene.
The way the keying is just makes me not want to watch it
Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:
Before the 1st guy say his dialogue, he should have a thinking action to indicate he suddenly thought of something important..
The first character needs a moment of realization to warn the other character. Right now he is eating a sandwich and suddenly breaks from that action without any anticipation.
the story and the scene is good but lack polish characters a little more
nice render! normally i wouldn't like how much shade is on the characters' faces, but it works with simple models like these.
Animator: Janice Liu
Description: Anxious construction worker Ed warns fellow worker Steve about the streams...
Experience: 3 years as a student
Time taken: Two and a half weeks