Dan Boot:

motions a little jerky but posing is nice

Byron Pockrandt:

Lip sync could use work. You had some great poses and expressions, but the breakdowns and timing need some work. I'd suggest starting with filming yourself acting out the scene for reference to get a better idea of what you want the final animation to look like. Also playblast often, so you can see what your work looks like as you work on it.