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June 2021 Competition

by Chloe Merwin

Final Rating: 5.47. Finished 24 out of 85 entries.

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Animator: Chloe Merwin

Description: Hey there! I am currently a student in computer animation, and still have much to learn. Open to all helpful critiques!

Rigs are "Dana" by Gabriel Salas
and "Waitress" by Santiago Calle!

Experience: I'm a student, so I've only been animating for a little over a year!

Time taken: About 1-2 weeks

Comments:

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Ben Zingo:

some of the motion feels good, and you've got the rare problem of maybe going too far with the body acting? Everything feels a bit too close together, I'd try maybe bringing the camera back a bit, use a wider lens, etc. so your characters have more room to move

ammon parkman:

You have some good squash and stretch and other main body poses. The things that stick out the most which could use some work are the arm IK arch problems also there are some hand rotation errors with the black woman around frames 150-165.

Byron Pockrandt:

I love the awkward atmosphere the characters give off. Most of the movements are good. I think there may a bit too much movement that's not entirely necessary. The waitress rig does break a little when she says "Voss". But great work all around.