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So is she the candy bar?
The lip syncing could be better, but the motion is fluid.
Vincent Henri Guillaume:
a tad overanimated, but very good efforts
nice expressions loved it :)
There's a lot of good stuff in here but it seems a little overdone in the middle for the way the character is speaking. That's just me, though. Also, why is a girl in the boys' locker room? haha
Nice animation ! :D I wish the girl was a tiny bit more expressive, but it's only my opinion haha.
Eric De Carolis:
- both characters lip syncs are off
- the guys screen left eye is too far into his head most of the time
- some of the guys gestures are unclear. I dont know what gesture you are going for when he does that hand wave around frame 174
Jay Jay :
I like it!
Bad boy and good girl
I like their animate style that based on their personality
Nice animate and Render❤️
Fantastic job!! My favorite so far.
I like curve of boy's movement
The animation feels nice, but the lip sync is really off. I'd focus on that next time. Nice work though!
juan francisco leon:
Nice work. The boy feels a little over-animated in places...the animation itself is great, but perhaps just a tad too energetic for the level of enthusiasm in the audio.
not bad .
Description: Tom is a Badboy...
Experience: 10 Years
Time taken: 7 Day