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Too Old for Halloween

by Tal Minks

Final Rating: 3.43. Finished 55 out of 62 entries.

458 views including the voting period.


Animator: Tal Minks

Description: Please Critique!

Experience: Intermediate

Time taken: 2 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Dave Roddick:

What's he doing at the beginning?

Tom Islava:

I know that in fr, 272 the guy is supposed to lean on the wall but it it looks like he's in front of her.


Can't really tell where the main poses are because everything is just floating.

Anais Larocque:

The way they move reminds me of astronauts on the moon.. It generally needs a more exciting timming. :) The personnalities of the characters are well defined !

Peyton Leatherman:

All the movements are pretty slow and happen at the same time, try to vary timing! The staging here has potential.