Too Old for Halloween
by Tal Minks
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What's he doing at the beginning?
I know that in fr, 272 the guy is supposed to lean on the wall but it it looks like he's in front of her.
Can't really tell where the main poses are because everything is just floating.
The way they move reminds me of astronauts on the moon.. It generally needs a more exciting timming. :) The personnalities of the characters are well defined !
All the movements are pretty slow and happen at the same time, try to vary timing! The staging here has potential.
Animator: Tal Minks
Description: Please Critique!
Time taken: 2 weeks