Police is filmed with...
by TJ Askew
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It feels like you didn't work a lot on the character inside the car, the one outside feels good though.
I like the dry pen idea.
I like the acting ....2nd character's animation shuld have been batter
Looks pretty good. i like that little side action where his pen runs out of ink.
Nice! when the guy in the car says his line, the cop moves too much and you can not focus on the right character. Maybe to save what you have that is nice, you could exagerate more the other character, let him change pose when he speaks and let him facing to camera more.
The cop is good. Wish you would have had time to finish the other guy's mouth instead of adding the graphics up front.
George John Bowden:
Great expressions and movement of the Police officer.
I suggested during the WIP stage that you remove the flashing text intro and I stand by that suggestion if you're planning on using it for reel purposes. It's a shame you didn't get to finish it, it's pretty good. A concern would be that the hitting sound of him slapping the pen into his hip doesn't fit the audio completely.
The guy in the car isn't animated enough. I like the animation on the cop though
Animator: TJ Askew
Description: I didn't get to finish my animation this month, I was experimenting with some new techniques I learned in "The Animator's Survival Kit."
Experience: 0 Years
Time taken: About 20 hours.