by Balázs Varga
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This could have been a lot better, the last half especially. Very floaty movement. The moves need to be snappier, especially that last punch at the end.
cool fight! :)
the last punch feels to week/slow to throw away the other guy.
Great work! The thing that stood out to me was the punch at the end. It was too early and not fast enough, but overall its a great animation, well done!
work on speed a little at the end
Broke the 180 rule! and not in a good way. otherwise good pacing, timing and gestures
switching the side of the camera after the blue one get up minute didn't work at all.
best so far, sounds right on, believable. i like that the last one was slow motion.
I wish that you hadn't ignored some of the sounds, the rest of the animation looks great
Well animated how ever I feel like the last bit 180-300 wasn't as strong as the rest of the animation.
not enough dynamic, you don't see the power of the punches, the characters look tired and even if, then the guy wouldn't fly away like that, exaggeration is key !
The punch at the end seems very slow, like the orange guy could have blocked it, the way he hopped over the leg-sweep at F84.
Floaty movements but besides that, it looks alright.
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The impact lack a bit of strength compared to the sound that was provided.
the end sound/animation does'nt match.
Animator: Balázs Varga
Description: Just two guys fighting
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 4 weeks