Isaiah Hoeninghaus:

The posing is solid, but the lack of movement in the characters eyes and eyebrows makes them look bored.

Maria:

Flutter of the hands on "fairy tales" is an especially nice touch.

Max:

I like the set up and the different ideas for character movements. But there’s some fundamentals missing such as moving of the hips and facial expressions. I think this could also Benefit a lot from break down poses. It‘a a little too pose-to-pose. I think with some more time spent on it, it could be really great though! The biggest thing is the lack of hip movement. I think Adding a little bit of that will bring this animation to the next level!

Bernard Ting:

try moving the eyes and eyebrow to give the charactor emotion

Henryk Jachimczyk:

Clear staging. The characters would benefit from more exaggeration in their movements.