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by Javier Martínez Lorenzo

Final Rating: 5.65. Finished 20 out of 55 entries.

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Animator: Javier Martínez Lorenzo

Description: A father and his daughter are in the park when something unexpected happens.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 3 weeks


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Lander de Aguirre:

Nice animation! keep working!

Space Chicken:

I love this funny animation. The happiness of the girl, the distraction of the father (Happy with his Tinder) and the funny crash of the car. I miss the glasses jumping on the father's face, it would have been the icing on the cake.

Leah M:

OP thats... an unfortunate turn of events

The lighting in the scene is nice but the dark edges makes it feel ominous. I love how well the little girl is animated in the scene as well. Adjusting her glasses then going for the ball. The expression of him being on his phone to seeing whats about to happen is well done as well. The setting feels full and well made.

If there was anything I'd change it's be the end. Instead of it just showing his face it could be her glasses falling where the vier can see his reaction through the lens. But this is really well done. And incredibly sad my poor heart.