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Hope to get a new life

by Frederic

Final Rating: 6.86. Finished 5 out of 55 entries.

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Animator: Frederic

Description: A prisoner have a hope to get a new life

Experience: 10 years

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Kevin C. Burke:

The scene, lighting, & lip-sync are excellent. I think he's overacting with his right hand. I think it would be more powerful if the blocking was simpler. Also his sitting down at frame 188 would benefit from greater weight (and maybe using both hands). I would try matching the spacing to reference.

Sam Larson:

The shots look really clean and don't detract from any of the animation.

Leah M:

Oh my-

I love the first two shots with the light that passes by the window as he turns away. The way he walks and turns to sit is very elegant. Then theres a guy minding his business takin a dump. The designs of both characters are fun contrast between each other.

I think something small like making toilet man a little more irritated earlier on sense his reaction is only a few seconds long. But this turned out so well really great job!