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The life of a promise

by Pablo García

Final Rating: 5.01. Finished 29 out of 55 entries.

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Animator: Pablo García

Description: The promise of life in the life of a promise. (First 3D try)

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 6 hours


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McKinley C:

the audio is off

Leah M:

This man needs a cup of tea

The animation here though very diffrent from the audio is really well done! His sharp harsh movement work together the lighting and coloring work well together as well. He comes off as an erratic character makes me wonder who tipped him off. In a few moments he almost looks sad as well withgives him more character.

The only thing I found odd was the twitch of his body. I think I got what you were going for it really really works I just think iif it were toned down just a little I would fit better but the idea that he's shaking in anger is a nice addition to his emotional stance.

olivia hartanto:

when he said " who once crossed the ... " , he kinda move erraticaly. is that a glitch or on purpose?

Salvatore La Rocca:

Hi! The animation it's very good but, according me, there are no match between audio (sad) and acting of the Character (angry), and that make the all animation weird for me. But it's good! Keep doing!

J.K. Riki:

The audio doesn't really suit the huge (and many) hand movements, so that is a little too distracting. If you moved the camera in a little closer I think you could make the movements more subtle. Anyway, keep at it, and good luck with the progress! You've got this.