« Back to July Competition

A Walk Down Melodrama Street

by G Cziraki

Final Rating: 5.19. Finished 26 out of 55 entries.

0 views including the voting period.


Animator: G Cziraki

Description: Man hath not seen a thing so fragile as the male ego.
/An actor walks down the stage, overplaying his self-pitying monologue./ Made with the Sam v1.2 rig by Gabriel Salas

Experience: 5-10 years on and off

Time taken: 4-5 days altogether, had to do it after work


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Leah M:

Ok yeah that got me

The word in the background was just the right size when i realized I laughed comedy right there. I love all his poses especially the arms back pose that goes into a more casual walk. I love the care free personality he gives off. the shake of his head near the end and him slowing down for a moment in the middle were perfect.

All i have is a nitpick or a question. Why doe he hold his stomach when he slows down. I can see on his face he was sad for a moment but it doesn't really matter

J.K. Riki:

He feels more like a puppet than a living, breathing character. The movements are a little too jerky and forced, let him act naturally and you'll really have something. I enjoy the background and camera move, it was a nice touch. Good luck next month!