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Just Your Average Conversation

by Jordan Proffitt-Hilbert

Final Rating: 2.80. Finished 115 out of 129 entries.

4,329 views including the voting period.


Animator: Jordan Proffitt-Hilbert

Description: I was not going for a direct backstory, but more for pose and expression. It is a simple conversation between the two characters. Fairly casual and developmental. I look forward to critiques!

Experience: Beginner to Intermediate

Time taken: Roughly over 20 hours


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Jordan Crownshaw:

Quite messy, movements are flying around all over, I'd really try and slow this one down. Their head and expression stay facing the same direction nearly the whole time, was it rushed? you need to make sure each body part complements their dialogue.