Robin Tamura:

Uum... I don't get it...
Anyway, your characters move very blocky and the staging could use some reworking. Having the guy stand right in the middle of the frame doesn't make for a very interesting composition.

Jordan Lewers:

I'm having some trouble understanding the idea of this animation

Jean Lamy:

Too many poses. Try holding some poses for longer.

Anonimator:

The posing, acting and mechanics feel pretty nice in the first shot. The guy on the floor seemed distracting, was not clear to me what was going on in the situation.

Darren Teh:

Might wanna work on better posing.. avoid freezing the characters..even tho the focus isn't on them.