Final Rating: 3.90. Finished 86 out of 151 entries.

373 views including the voting period.


Animator: Aion Lee

Description: 3D animation

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 1 week


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Nikolas Diamant:

Exaggerate everything more

Adam Momsen:

I think the posing here is fairly strong, especially with the older guy being really creepy and glancing around. Though I'm not sure why he's crouched way down low, his face apparently right behind the young guy's butt. It also looks like he's going in for a kiss there at some point but then breaks away. Either is fine, but commit to one idea or the other.

Animation kind of goes from one pose to the next without a lot of fluidity. Work on successive breaking of joints and your moving holds (I have issues with this too so it stands out to me here).

Lip sync needs a lot of work. Study up on the shapes the mouth makes when making different sounds (I literally sit and mouth this stuff out when I animate). But right now it does not look like the mouths are hitting the shapes they need to.

Nathan Greensmith:

Great poses, nice animation. lip sync needs some work but good job.

Bruno de Coninck:

The first character (the red shirted one) is a bit under animated. For the second, I think adding some quick mouvement could make it more natural. Except that, good work!

Kyra Toomey:

The acting isn't bad, lighting is good, but the main concern i saw was the audio and lip sync was off. Make sure your mouth animation is a few frames before the actual sound.