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Decisions, Decisions...

by Roy Matos

Final Rating: 4.08. Finished 74 out of 151 entries.

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Animator: Roy Matos

Description: These two only want you to make the right choice. Well... A Choice.

Experience: 4 Years

Time taken: 2 Weeks (On & Off)

Comments:

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Bruno de Coninck:

Prety good over all. The first move of the first character is a bit slow and the frame manipulation of the second is kind of shy. It could be more exagerated, I think...

Nikolas Diamant:

Hilarious second character! Good job

Tyson Haeh:

Cool idea to have him grab onto the frame but the acting choices are lacking

Ben Halstead:

Great posing! Not bad on the lip sync too. The main thing I would look into is the floaty movement between poses. Try pushing your eases

Nathan Greensmith:

Some fantastic acting and emotion, great poses and animation. I love the breaking of the fourth wall. Awesome job.

Borislav Dimitrov:

use props to sell the idea of what they are trying to say. right now is two talking persons, waving hands and walking around

Lea:

Nice idea but could definitely be refined.

Kelly Holmes:

Love the second characters entrance!

Kyra Toomey:

Nice hitting the beats, but maybe try pushing it by hitting them a bit harder. Drag stuff as the character makes those fast actions and snap them into place soon after the body (keeping in mind overshoot and settle).

Samidha Kumar:

nice staging... but work on the holds and timing. A video reference always helps :)