Robert Zhou:

Good work. I think your walks are a bit too jerky on the head, kind of like a pigeon. Also, it might help to put the middle character further back in the scene at the end so she/he can actually look at the character on the left. I really like how you interpreted the scene though.

Bruno de Coninck:

The key poses really need more work here. The overall motion is really floaty too. If you didn't used reference, I stongly suggest you to give it a try!

Nathan Greensmith:

Great narrative, ok sense of timing with good camera angles. Character performance could be better. But over all good work.