Final Rating: 3.99. Finished 79 out of 151 entries.

418 views including the voting period.


Animator: Dustin Cinnamon

Description: Completed this for an animation class.

Experience: Minimal experience animating

Time taken: 10-15 hours


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Bruno de Coninck:

Good start. But the mouvement stop like if the characters hit a wall. Rework your ease-in and ease-out. Also some inbetween work could improve your animation!

Nathan Greensmith:

Great shot with some great key poses, lip sync seems a little off to me and I think it needs a little more anticipation before some movements, but over all good work.

Adam Momsen:

Feels a little floaty and too much pose-to-pose. Keep an eye on successive breaking of joints, not everything hitting on the same frame (you do some of this well, like in goggle-guy's fingers during 'wilfred the merciful').

I do like the 'subject-in-a-test-tube setup though, there's definitely a story here (especially since everyone looks the same... evil clones?)


second voice character's hand movement not with arc and easy in easy out also timing

Mag Magnet:

Great idea there with the bow! Fits the dialogue well.

Kyle Novak:

one of the better concepts.