Wilfred The Merciful
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Bruno de Coninck:
Good start. But the mouvement stop like if the characters hit a wall. Rework your ease-in and ease-out. Also some inbetween work could improve your animation!
Great shot with some great key poses, lip sync seems a little off to me and I think it needs a little more anticipation before some movements, but over all good work.
Feels a little floaty and too much pose-to-pose. Keep an eye on successive breaking of joints, not everything hitting on the same frame (you do some of this well, like in goggle-guy's fingers during 'wilfred the merciful').
I do like the 'subject-in-a-test-tube setup though, there's definitely a story here (especially since everyone looks the same... evil clones?)
second voice character's hand movement not with arc and easy in easy out also timing
Great idea there with the bow! Fits the dialogue well.
one of the better concepts.
Animator: Dustin Cinnamon
Description: Completed this for an animation class.
Experience: Minimal experience animating
Time taken: 10-15 hours