Final Rating: 3.31. Finished 115 out of 151 entries.

347 views including the voting period.


Animator: Phuah wil xan

Description: a guys, cant help a guys

Experience: 8 month

Time taken: 1 month


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Bruno de Coninck:

The biggest problem I see here is the lack of contrast in the speed of your animation. Also, your motions are too slow.

Ben Halstead:

I would emphasize your poses and expressions more, and watch out for floating arms and hands (for example, the hand that is holding his head wanders away slowly)

Nathan Greensmith:

Nice shot, good poses, animation and lip sync need a tiny bit of refinement, but good effort.

Kyra Toomey:

You're hitting the verbal beats but Hold your key poses for a bit longer to make them mean more instead of splining to the next key. The lip sync is off; shift the keys of the mouth a few frames before the audio and see how that looks.