Robert Zhou:

Decent work! You could vary their poses some more, maybe move the left character's legs at least. You got some basics down though, and that's good :)

Nikolas Diamant:

Work on the lip-sync

Richard Clark:

I recommend shooting reference next time. Your characters barely move.

Edward Chris Evjen:

Beware of drifting from pose to pose.

Bruno de Coninck:

Your moves are basically to slow. Adding some contrast in the speed and poses wil also help a lot! Goodfluck!

Nathan Greensmith:

Some good poses, performance is a little lost due to distance of the characters from the camera and matching colour of the background. But good effort.

Samidha Kumar:

nice idea... but work on the poses, holds and timing. A video reference always helps :)