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Trapped in a basement

by Mike Brewer

Final Rating: 3.09. Finished 128 out of 151 entries.

344 views including the voting period.


Animator: Mike Brewer

Description: Two guys telling a third his only way out..

Experience: several classes

Time taken: 1 month


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Robert Zhou:

Decent work! You could vary their poses some more, maybe move the left character's legs at least. You got some basics down though, and that's good :)

Nikolas Diamant:

Work on the lip-sync

Richard Clark:

I recommend shooting reference next time. Your characters barely move.

Edward Chris Evjen:

Beware of drifting from pose to pose.

Bruno de Coninck:

Your moves are basically to slow. Adding some contrast in the speed and poses wil also help a lot! Goodfluck!

Nathan Greensmith:

Some good poses, performance is a little lost due to distance of the characters from the camera and matching colour of the background. But good effort.

Samidha Kumar:

nice idea... but work on the poses, holds and timing. A video reference always helps :)