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Trouble for Atom !

by Levan

Final Rating: 7.14. Finished 4 out of 151 entries.

5,093 views including the voting period.


Animator: Levan

Description: Atom gets in trouble, helpless and desperate... Wilford appeared to be a traitor.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 7 days


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Nikolas Diamant:

Whoa, awesome job!

Adam Momsen:

This. Is. Awesome.

There's a lot of subtlety I love here. Even just lifting the prisoner's chin with the tip of the bat is great. Flipping the bat while he walks away, taking a drag on the cigar... very nice!

And then the old guy comes in and steals the show. I LOVE his expressions during 'Wilfred the Merciful'. Pose is great even while sitting in the chair.

I think my only real critique here is the hold when the first guy finishes speaking, cigar in the air. He seems to come to a dead stop for a couple of frames before the old guy speaks and he turns to look.

Very nicely done!

Paul Wei:

Really awesome work! My vote for the winner of this month.


Good one...

Nathan Greensmith:

Good animation, good performance, nice work.

Leonardo Pereira:

Very nice work and acting. In the frame 76 need more work in the arm and wrist. I think in the frame 214 when the big buy catch the bat, need more work no weight in that action. But very good in general, I think int the best 15.

Bruno de Coninck:

Great animation! The only think I see is the fall of your blue character seems a bit slow, but except that, great work!

Paula Decanini:

Add a little drift in the bat and blue head during "...come save you". Also when character flips the bat, the bat feels weightless. Overall good job! I like the characters glances at each other. Good acting choice.

Kyle Novak:

Great character concepts, predictable concept, awesome lighting as well.

Ben Halstead:

Great lip syncs!

Martin Strom:

I think this could be the winner! The animation fits perfectly with the sound and the scenario is pretty much the same I was thinking about when I heard this the first time. So smart with the old man coming in on a wheelchair while he say's "yeesss......!". Great job! :)

Davit Martirosyan:

Nice one!