Final Rating: 3.54. Finished 105 out of 151 entries.

336 views including the voting period.


Animator: Ashley Lau

Description: Two cops interrogate a suspect.

Experience: Student

Time taken: 5 days


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Richard Clark:

Funny idea! I would shoot reference next time. Some of your characters barely move.

Nikolas Diamant:

Funny concept

Nathan Greensmith:

Movements aren't very fluid but it reads very well and looks good, good job.

Bruno de Coninck:

I think that your moving hold are a bit too shy. Also, your moovs are too slow and everyting seems to be at the same speed. Add more speed contrast and I think your work will improve a lot!

Brad Bradbury:

this is ok.
You have very simple movements
that move linearly with no overlap.

You need to think about how smaller movements effect all the other parts.
ex, during the yawn, the hand stays completely still against his face. 18 - 50

When the bald guy bends in at 180, same thing.
Yes you want IK so that the hand doesn't float around but the arm and shoulder will be affected by the weight.

You need to work in overlap in places
As he lifts his hand at 133, the hand is heavy so it should rotate down,(fingers also).

Kyra Toomey:

Throw some offset in the actions and it'll really push your animation (ex, don't let his shoulders settle at the same time after the shrug, just a few frames off).