Final Rating: 3.59. Finished 100 out of 151 entries.

359 views including the voting period.


Animator: Shannon Lau

Description: Two men encourage a woman to light the Wilford Signal.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 2 and a half weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Richard Clark:

I recommend shooting reference next time

Ben Halstead:

Too much freezing in the movement... seems a bit robotic. Nice staging though.

Bruno de Coninck:

I don't know if you did used the pose to pose animation technic but if you did, your poses are not very strong. There is also a lack of moving hold and I suggest you to try to avoid linear mooves. Your character should create ark with their moves. It will looks a lot more natural.

Nathan Greensmith:

Really appreciate the bat signal reference. The animation is quite minimal, but good effort.


Characters could have been framed better
movement a little stiff

Ramsey Parks:

The animation is good, but I feel that you could have zoomed in on the two characters when they were talking instead of keeping them all in frame.

Evgeniy Shumskiy:

i like the animation, but composition kinda broken. the fat and the thin guy should frame the girl and her only escape is the button.

Kyra Toomey:

Nice acting and subtlty (like when the second character taps his fingers together). Throwing in overshoots and settles would help the animation a lot.