by Paul Schwarz, July Competition Winner!
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Samar Preet Bawa:
Excellent work, what more can I say? Love it.
Anneke de Graaf:
I loved your animation, really nice endingpose and the way the guy approches the woman looks great! Good job! One thing I would do personally is at the 'Not', a bounce back on his hand. To make it a bit stronger.
Great! Well done!
Some stronger mouth positions might improve lip sync - M and V seem to be a little soft? And transition wise, I think her right hand should stay on the wall behind her for at least a fraction of a second in the last shot ( because that is where she placed it few moments ago )?
But I am being nitpicky :D You really did a great job!
Incredible drawing! Good luck!
poses and facial expressions are nice. Maybe a little more energy would make it even stronger
Wow! Great acting, well drawn, well animated.
FANTASTIC expressions and hand gestures, just use a bit more emphasis on the lips and your golden!
Looks really good. Here is a couple of suggestions. It would be nice to see a subtle headshake side to side on the women as she starts to lean back before giving her line. Also, cutting to man a bit quicker before he says "No" would help. Also minor thing, his chin is getting a little close to tangeting at the end. Good job.
wow.. this one packs a punch.. like to see it in the top ten.
Best piece! The movement is so accurate and simple, no wasted movements. In the second shot, if the camera zoom in a little bit, that may be better, any way, it's really really good acting.
Ryan D Lowe:
Amazing drawings. Amazing. I feel the transitions are too even though. A bit floaty in small places. Could be tightened a bit. My favorite so far however, great work!
Very nice! Love the acting and poses on the last shot particularly.
Awesome job! Very clear acting choices.
great shot .
Good graphic style
Sahutsawat Seng Khantrum:
one of the best ive seen so far great job.
Brilliant! Only thought was in the staging in 2nd camera view would have been better if the top of his head wasn't cut off. The crazed personality of the scientist really shows through. The fear in the woman. The acting is spot on.
Nice job on the creepiness of the male character!!! Simple idea yet effective!
Good job. Love the acting. :)
Animator: Paul Schwarz
Description: A woman is in disbelief after a demonstrated experiment.
Experience: 4-5 Years
Time taken: 3-4 Weeks