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Hes just green around the gills!

by Jordan Williams

Final Rating: 3.30. Finished 164 out of 201 entries.

47 views including the voting period.


Animator: Jordan Williams

Description: Doctor has reanimated a human head!!

Experience: 3 years of University

Time taken: 36 hours


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Danny Kneip:

Super strange camera move and final composition. The lip sync needs polishing, as do the character movements and gestures.