Save another Life
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Anneke de Graaf:
you made me laugh, cool animation!
Hahaha loved it
I like the way that the little chicken fell
A beautiful render, no doubt, and amusing ending. Be sure to watch out for the eyes sinking behind the nose (ie. F111, 117, etc). Even F67, the man in the green shirt has one eye sinking behind his nose.. not sure why. The sync on the opening line needs a lot of polishing, but the remaining two lines are decent. Cutting to the closeup of the bird in the hand, the fingers are melded together and also into the bird!! The animation rolls on a bit too long for my liking. The releasing of the bird is well done, as is the subsequent cut and reaction, but could have ended there.
You can keep it funny and make it shorter !
Ryan D Lowe:
You use those huge white eyes to their fullest. Extra star for that. I'm still trying to learn eye darts. Great examples here.
Animator: Justas Mikolaitis
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 9 hours