Final Rating: 5.84. Finished 19 out of 201 entries.

199 views including the voting period.


Animator: Satish Kumar

Description: This is my first time Participating in the competition.

Experience: 6

Time taken: 2 days


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Daniel Vasconcellos:

nice render, cool animation, need a bit of work in the lipsync!

Paul Wei:

The guy's animation at the end is nice. The girl's animation seems rougher, especially her eye blinks and her settle after she turns.

Vinu Nair:

quite good! but the expressions of girl would have been much more better :)


she is sniffing like a squirrel the first 100 frames,
but he acts great. facials look good

Amartya Mukherji:

very well done.

Jack Granger:

I like the eye movement in the girl but I think tone down the blinks

Ryan D Lowe:

Lip sync needs better shapes to read more clearly.

Hannah Wilson:

Overall it's looking really good, but one spot that could be improved is that first split second. The woman is accusing him of killing someone, but the face she makes when she's supposed to be thinking about it looks more like, "oh, I forgot to do my laundry", rather than "this guy killed someone and I'm just realizing it." She should look a little more torn apart. Other than that, good work!