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Animator: Rachel Shackleton

Description: After almost a 2 year absence from Maya, I've decided to try and get back into 3D. If critique could focus on the animation itself and not the lack of modelling/textures, that would be appreciated. Hoping to make next month's entry better.

Experience: 4 years Uni, 2 years freelance

Time taken: 10 hours or so, mostly relearning


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Vinu Nair:

who killed whom?

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!