Final Rating: 2.86. Finished 178 out of 201 entries.

46 views including the voting period.


Animator: Jake

Description: A first attempt! I took the dialog pretty literally, but it's more for practice for the time being.

Experience: 1 Year

Time taken: ~4hours?


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Carlo Nicoletta:

Try to show his elbow on his back arm during his final pose's by. As of right now, it feels like he's just got a forearm and hand sticking out of his chest.

Dan Harriman:

Good poses. But it's hard to read them because of the camera's position.

Sarah Johnson:

His neck looks like it's really hurting at the end there. Work on your staging and appeal.

Sergio Barragan L:


Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!