Comments:
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Carlo Nicoletta:
Try to show his elbow on his back arm during his final pose's by. As of right now, it feels like he's just got a forearm and hand sticking out of his chest.
Dan Harriman:
Good poses. But it's hard to read them because of the camera's position.
Sarah Johnson:
His neck looks like it's really hurting at the end there. Work on your staging and appeal.
Sergio Barragan L:
terrible!
Ryan D Lowe:
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Animator: Jake
Description: A first attempt! I took the dialog pretty literally, but it's more for practice for the time being.
Experience: 1 Year
Time taken: ~4hours?