Final Rating: 3.58. Finished 152 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: Stefan Forde

Description: Two sons' father is in a coma and one son tries his best to bring his father back he tried many times and is about to give up but he gives it a shot

Experience: Im now starting, i have been animating for a year

Time taken: this took three weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Daniel Vasconcellos:

good lightning, needs more time in the animation, keep it up!

Moy Parra:

I would focus on a much simpler story and make sure to execute that as best as possible rather than worrying about so many characters and elements interacting at the same time.

Amy Marie Baldwin:

The poses are quite extreme and are off putting. Good effort though, it would've read a lot better if the first character didn't "break" so much if that makes sense?

Aaron Junyou:

The facial expressions can be stronger for the blue guy. Also, I don't see the mouth of the grey guy move when he says his line.

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!