Final Rating: 4.91. Finished 29 out of 61 entries.

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Animator: arbertus leone

Description: 2 girls who don't agree with each other

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 3 days


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Isaiah Hoeninghaus:

I think the hands bounce around too much, if they bounced like twice in a pose I think it would help the poses be more impactful. Good job otherwise, though.

Shaun Bartoo:

Really great start! I'd suggest thinking about using less poses and more holds. Trying to keep to one pose per 'phrase' or so will make your animation less busy and more clear. I love a lot of your acting choices though! I think this one has promise, just needs a bit more polish.

David Fliesen:

Th the shot sequence is hard to follow. You might want to review techniques for shot composition. It's like the two characters are shot in the same position and popped from left to right making it seem like a jump cut.