A Phone Call
by Yee Hui Wong
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Pretty good acting. My main advice would be to watch your arcs. Theres a lot of popping happening here. You could get a lot of polish just by individually working up from COG to chest, head, elbows, hands and polishing each arc for smoother timing and spacing
While we only see one person in your animation, the movements to convey a second person on the phone are a bit over done. It just doesn't feel like it's portraying the audio. And she seems more like a Broadway actress practicing her lines than someone talking into a phone. The clip should feel believable.
Animator: Yee Hui Wong
Description: She received a phone call from her accomplice and she was not happy about it.
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Time taken: Roughly two weeks