Final Rating: 3.25. Finished 57 out of 61 entries.

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Animator: Paul Boogaards

Description: two people get in trouble.

Experience: 5 years of school

Time taken: a little bit each day


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Tom Islava:

I'd say put more work on the expressions, the sync is pretty off, and hands and arms needed more variation on the timing and poses

Shaun Bartoo:

timing and posing could be stronger. I'd suggest filming reference for more interesting acting choices as well

Richard Adams:

Wow. *Really* nicely animated!

Predrag Lazic:

The cinematography is good.

David Fliesen:

Pick characters that fit the voices in the audio clips so your audience will believe they are the ones saying the lines and be able to focus on your work instead of asking themselves if that is a man's or woman's voice instead. Also suggest you review the 12 principles of animation: