Shaun Bartoo:

Really great start! Shame its feeling a little incomplete. The acting is working pretty well! Just needs some cleanup and inbetweening now.

Tom Islava:

I'm gonna have to give one star for this because there are some great poses and ideas you laid out, but I don't know, maybe if you had more time to work on it.

Olivia English:

Great posing and emotion! A lot of the more finished ones overlook a solid base.

Richard Adams:

Would've gotten a much higher score had you been able to finish this. Still really solid sketching. Stays on-model, and good staging.

David Fliesen:

Nice start but would have liked to see a finished work.