Seth Jackson:

Cool that you set up the shot from outside the room :) Expressive poses but could animate more frames

Richard Adams:

Looks like you didn't make it past the blocking stage. Would've gotten a higher score if you had. Still happy you entered. :) Good concept and staging you came up with.

Predrag Lazic:

Some lightning would help.

David Fliesen:

Best not to use copyright intellectual property like this plus either get characters with lips that move or show us they are talking with the way you animate the characters.