Aaron James Mongcopa:

funny! lack of slow in and slow out though.

Adrian Petitjean:

Weight problems . Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals

Victor Lemée:

lack some weight, Take some reference and watch your arcs,
add more anticipation here and there, good ideas for the end, make me laugh

Alvindra Surya Wardana:

great!!! the man who play the guitar is great..
just make extras more alive to make it awesome, now it's still like a robot..