Gordon begins to rise
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The animation must be smoother and more in sync with the dialogue also we can't tell the man is looking at the woman
be sure to act the dialogue out yourself so you understand which poses make sense
The hands on the woman are like paddles, spacing is very jerky and the arms are twinning.
Description: Gordon's mother encourages Gordon because his girlfriend left him
Experience: 2 year
Time taken: 10 days