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George John Bowden:
Some nice acting, however the camera doesn't do justice to the performance. Composition could improve this a lot.
nice animation. But, if you had thought of setting a more interesting layout, your animation would have looked even better. You needed to establish the two characters in a wider shot and then go tighter in order to make the acting readable. Camera Cuts with good composition could have made the same animation look much much better. You lost at least one star for that.
Description: She is very despotical. And captivated redpeople into slavery in mars. But she think that doing them better. Some people she trying change affectionately, some people she trying change by force.
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