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Not So Subtle Manipulation

by John Tyson

Final Rating: 3.37. Finished 56 out of 83 entries.

360 views including the voting period.


Animator: John Tyson

Description: Someone's unhappy with their sons decision and they aim to fix it.

Experience: A few classes in college and previous entries here.

Time taken: 13.75 hours over 2 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Baley Jauma-Hall:

Pretty good, pretty good.

Nicholas McCamish:

Very smooth! However, I would recommend a lot more expression in the poses. ;)

Brian Duffy:

this is cool. very subtle, but a bit too floaty. maybe missed some opportunities for hitting harder notes. would rather see you focusing on body language and a power dynamic between mom and son, rather than focusing on facial expression and lip sync.