Johann Wong:

Tighten up the overall animation, they looks floaty here.

Scott:

The audio alludes to a more intimate situation, so pushing the camera in on the characters will allow us to be more involved.

Donald Marks:

I think a bit overacted., but pretty decent. Some of the tweens between the poses are a bit floaty, work on some ease ins and ease outs with some nice arcs to them.

Hajar Khakrand:

it would have been better if it were more close up

Luke Coleman:

Please zoom the camera in, you seem to have done good work animating, but it is difficult to make out because the viewer is so far away.

Lea:

A few camera cuts might be nice - the framing is a little static here.