Final Rating: 3.04. Finished 85 out of 93 entries.

451 views including the voting period.


Animator: Callum Sewell

Description: This is my first 11 second club animation and my first animating project. Here is a link to my blog:
The blog is showing the step I took when creating (Pre-Production) this animation.

Experience: Beginner

Time taken: 5 days


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Nik Ottinger:

Looks cool! But the cuts are really quick and the staging goes a little everywhere. Try to cut fewer times and to keep characters on their own sides of the screen (for example you could try having character A on the left , facing right while character B can be on the left facing A)


The lighting is nice, however there are a lot of camera cuts for such a short piece.

Erin Goddard:

Lots of camera jumping around makes it disorienting to watch. try to bring more emotion into the facial expression instead of going straight to dilating the pupils.

Andrew DiLullo:

The camera is all over the place. Movements are way too stiff. The mouth movements are close, but need some closer syncing.

Johann Wong:

Needing some work on the basics. Character are stiff. Lacking spine & hip movement. Lipsinc could be simpler & more variety with the mouth shapes.

Sergio Montenegro:

Very out of sync with the audio. Very weird and misleading camera angles that change constantly.